应用文写作(满分15分)假定你是李华,2022年北京冬奥会组委会正在招募全球志愿者,你打算申请参加。请你用英文给组委会写一封邮件,内容包括:

假定你是李华,得知北京2022年冬奥会正在招募英语服务志愿者,请写一封申请信,内容包括:

1. 表达兴趣;

2. 自身优势;

3. 希望获准。

注意:1. 词数80左右;

2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

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【答案】


《示例一》:

   Dear Sir or Madam,


   I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer for Beijing 2022 Winter Olympic Games.

I'm convinced that I'm well qualified for the position. First, I have a good command of oral English, which enables me to communicate with others freely. What's more,I have some relevant work experience,working as a volunteer for years at international football and basketball games. I regard it a great opportunity and a privilege to introduce China to foreign friends in my own way.

   Any favorable consideration of my application would be highly appreciated. Looking forward to your reply.


Yours,               

Li Hua

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《示例二》

To Whom It May Concern,

My name is Li Hua, I am keen to do some voluntary work for the 2022 Winter Olympics. So I am writing to apply to be a volunteer.

I am active and outgoing, which can be a great help for voluntary work. Besides, I am familiar with how to perform my duty. Most important of all, I have a good command of English. I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance and I do hope I can be accepted as a member of volunteers.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封邀请信。

【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封去邀请信:假定你是李华,得知北京2022年冬奥会正在招募英语服务志愿者,请写一封申请信,内容包括:1. 表达兴趣;2. 自身优势;3. 希望获准。

第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:be keen to do sth.,apply to be a volunteer,a great help,be familiar with,most important of all,have a good command of,look forward to等。

第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。同时文中使用高级句子。I am active and outgoing, which can be a great help for voluntary work. 句中使用定语从句;I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance and I do hope I can be accepted as a member of volunteers.句中使用了固定句型和被动语态。


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